"The Last Stop"

I think this story was written very well. He made what he was writing about very vivible to his readers. All the reactions he had to things are the same reactions I owuld have had. When he was in the parlor and would not get any closer to the body because he did not want to see it, I would have been the same way. The description of what the room where they embalmed the bodies smelled like was very realistic and I could imagine exactly what it would be like and smell like. I liked the way he observed the actions of Mr. Deaver al throughout the obseration. I also liked it when he would interview him and see Mr. Deaver's perspective.